This is the feedback sheet that I recieved for my first drafts of my maazine, the points along the top are improvements and the points along the bottom are positives of my first drafts. As you can tell there are more improvements than positives for my first drafts, however I did expect this. First of all for the front cover people said that they liked my title name and font, however to improve this i could have added a banner to make the title look more professional, to do this i will add formatting to the title, such as lines and boxes. People also think that I should add some more formatting overall and also agree to this point. People also said that they liked the attitude in the photo and i may keep this photo for the front cover or if i was to retake it i will make the model do the same pose. The font that i used for the content page was not the best and i knew this before i got feedback and i am going to look at my style models and discover the best font to use for my conents page. However people said that they liked the layout of my content page and i will keep the layout similar for my final document. For the double page spread i knew that before i got feedback the image was too bright and i knew that this photo was always a risk because of the brightness of the graffiti in the background of the image, for my final document i will use an image preferably in the studio. People did sa they liked the font for 'jamie turner' and this was a font i downloaded and i also like this font so i will definitely use it for my final document.
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